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Seven Segment: Part I

Postby iamdavidbyrne » Fri Oct 24, 2008 12:19 pm

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Re: Seven Segment: Part I

Postby rcdude » Fri Oct 24, 2008 1:27 pm

Looks intersting.


Only read a little of the begenign though.


What exactly is it about? Looks like it's set in the future, or something.
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Re: Seven Segment: Part I

Postby filmlyfe » Fri Oct 24, 2008 4:53 pm

4 8 15 16 23 42.....


Interesting setting. Are the conversations all one shot? Or did you just not bother to include them. For some reason the part with the truck driving reminds me of No Country when Lewellyn goes back to the trucks in the desert and the Mexicans show up on the hill with their truck in a semi sillouette.
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Re: Seven Segment: Part I

Postby agentorange » Fri Oct 24, 2008 6:21 pm

Well you definitely peaked my interest at the end there. Feels like a count down, but to what? I guess I can imagine. ;)

How long until we can expect part 2?
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Re: Seven Segment: Part I

Postby Jeff » Sat Oct 25, 2008 8:12 am

Hopefully this carries on through. Just finished the first part on a rainy, dreary Saturday morning.
Would be a good day for a little more! Carry on!
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Re: Seven Segment: Part I

Postby wa5 » Sat Oct 25, 2008 10:35 am

Looks pretty good so far, keep up the great work.... Trevor :)
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Re: Seven Segment: Part I

Postby Cyberhal » Sat Oct 25, 2008 2:37 pm

I like it. Looking forward to next installment.
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