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667 Comments

PostPosted: Tue Dec 01, 2009 6:16 pm
by Saxon Dog
Good and bad criticism here please, so the flow of the story isnt interrupted.
Be kind, its my first effort.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:16 am
by dancergael
Keep the story going. I'm interested!

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 3:47 pm
by Matov
Really like it and am intrigued.

The only thing I would say is that maybe you could space it out a bit more ? Perhaps a line between each paragraph might make it easier to read.

Re: 667 Comments

PostPosted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 4:48 pm
by Saxon Dog
Hooray! 2 fans!

OK, suggestion noted. I'll go back and edit a little.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 5:30 pm
by Jeff
This is going somewhere...great ride so far 8-)

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 2:15 pm
by quietearth
Just to point out folks, we've had 2 people get script work for films in this forum by showing their writing.. so while it may not look like lots of people respond, people do pay attention.

Re: 667 Comments

PostPosted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 3:36 pm
by Saxon Dog
Funny you should mention that :D

667 started out as a book, but Im not a dedicated enough novelist and the story started and stopped many times. Next I started a movie script but thats nearly as bad. Posting condensed pieces of it in diary format will at least get the story out of my head.

If anyones interested, 667 covers the first year in Tunnel 3 and I have a good outline of that much. I have 2 "sequels" in mind already that dont necessarily take place in Tunnel 3, so dont assume any of these characters survive.

I have my own Forum (x2am.com) but its very much preliminary in-work and more focused right now on making low-budget movies. I thought about posting 667 there, but frankly, no one would have ever seen it.
Better to let you folks enjoy it here. I hope you enjoy it.

PS - I'll take any help I can get to make this better. If anyone knows of potential "Tunnels" in their state, let me know. Any large cave or tunnel or industrial type basement. -Thanks

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 4:55 pm
by Jeff
Here's a link to a great place here in Canada. I'm surprised it hasn't been used as a set....yet!

I believe it is 'managed' as a private/local attraction and would be great for a QE Film Festival....gee, now there's a project...note to self. They do show movies once a month...Dr. Strangelove, natch! Read on...

http://www.diefenbunker.ca/ 8-)

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 7:16 pm
by Saxon Dog
Outstanding. I would never have found that or known to look.

The Greenbriar Hotel in W Virginia had a "secret" bunker under it for the US Pres. Supposedly its shut down.

Supposedly.

Tunnel 3 is an actual location, its under the old Boeing Wichita factory, where they made B-29s in the 40s.

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 7:57 pm
by Saxon Dog
Heres a link on a similar site in Britain, not sure if the reporter got all the facts correct tho

http://www.environmentalgraffiti.com/fe ... -city/5162