by docwho2100 » Sun Apr 17, 2011 1:29 am
I just joined and was reading 667 -wow - I really liked how you expanded the world, it was almost like watching the news and going, wow that happened there (the urine drinker tunnel really caught my interest and I liked seeing how, sometimes, when you think someone is down, they are not). I have tinkered with a couple of stories, but sorta new to the PA concept, and your crafting of this world has some great ideas woven in (people burying stuff, very awesome idea) that have sparked my imagination and I felt like, yeah, this could really happen and be a possible way humans kept going.
It is a shame it ended, I have so many questions and really wanted to know how the main character fared, which at least we got to see, I am assuming from 667 entry, they make it to year two having survived the uprising.
Did you formally publish this somewhere? I do not have a kindle or such, but would be interested in an official copy if you published.
Thanks again for the story!